In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, some governments are motivating industries and
businesses
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to relocate from the big
cities
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to regional
areas
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. In my opinion,
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there are some drawbacks, moving to suburban
areas
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is more beneficial than the opposite. Admittedly, relocating to a local
area
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has a number of negative impacts.
Firstly
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, moving
companies
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needs
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amount of costs. When they relocate from a city to a rural
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,
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plenty of preparations are necessary for running their
businesses
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,
such
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as building,
infrastructure
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and infrastructure
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, to name a few.
Secondly
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,
companies
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located
in
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the outskirt
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outskirt
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outskirts
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cannot interact with other
companies
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readily compared to
companies
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in urban
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.
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, the time for moving to clients should be taken into account.
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is because face-to-face meetings are still popular,
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the number of online meetings has been increasing. One evident benefit of relocating to provincial
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is that industries and
businesses
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can create new jobs there.
Companies
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, in fact, can hire employees living in a rural
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area
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areas
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at
relatively
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a relatively
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reasonable cost compared to the
cities
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, which leads to enhancing the job markets and economy in the regional
areas
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. Another advantage is that the governments can deal with overpopulation in the
cities
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through
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movement. Most people living in
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commute to their workplace, but if
companies
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move to
rural
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a rural
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area
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areas
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, city dwellers do not need to settle down in the urban
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, the movement results in
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decline
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density
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the density
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of
population
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the population
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. In conclusion,
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businesses
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in the big
cities
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moving to rural
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has
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some negative impacts, it can bring more benefits. By doing so, governments can make new job opportunities in the rural
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, and solve the overpopulation in the
cities
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional areas
  • big cities
  • encouraging
  • industries
  • businesses
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • economic growth
  • overcrowding
  • traffic congestion
  • employment opportunities
  • balanced regional development
  • preservation of natural resources
  • quality of life
  • cultural diversity
  • lack of infrastructure
  • amenities
  • skilled workers
  • impact on the environment
  • decline in the economy
  • social and cultural challenges
  • integrating
  • new industries
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