Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.

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For centuries,
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is
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the major source of communication.It is argued that the annual extinction of many languages is not a problem because having few languages will lead to a more convenient life.I totally disagree with
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statement which will affect the country's
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.The below essay will elucidate the importance of
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to
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,followed by a conclusion.
To begin
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with,
language
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is not a group of spoken words,it represents someone's
culture
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.
Language
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has evolved thousands of years to reflect what it means to a particular place.
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, the Irish
language
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consists of a wide range of vocabulary in the world and reflects their tradition of storytelling, but now
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has become the first
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in Irish because it is easy to communicate with the world.Many books were written in the native
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such
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as Gita is written in the Sanskrit
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many people don't know about the Sanskrit
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.
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, speaking
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and Chinese will alienate more people around the world.
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may be common,but it takes years to acquire it.Some countries like Korea and Vietnam
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trying to adopt
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as a second
language
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for a long time, but ,
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some people cannot grasp it.
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, For a long ,time
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has been a
language
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for business and it should be encouraged to help a country become more economically competitive.
To conclude
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,
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spoken languages may make life better; yet
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should not be an expense for less relevant dialects in order to avoid the country's tradition,
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and alienation
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many countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Endangered languages
  • Homogenization
  • Multilingualism
  • Language preservation
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Global communication
  • Intellectual diversity
  • Ecological knowledge
  • Cultural traditions
  • Communication barriers
  • Preservation efforts
  • Technological solutions
  • Language revival
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