The subjects that children are taught in schools are decided by central authorities. Some people say that teachers, not politicians, should be responsible for this task. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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modern days, parents increasingly care about the quality of

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their children receive. There is an undeniable fact that in many countries, the

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content is decided by the authorities.

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, many are inclined to believe that

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, not

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, should be the ones designing the school syllabus

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because the tutors understand what is best for their

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. I am at variance to a large extent, as I believe

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should still make final arrangements, as there needs to be a standardized agenda of what to be taught in all schools to ensure

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consistent quality

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. Critics of the modern

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system argue that

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should have the

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to decide what to teach their pupils as they understand their

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the most,

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are able to tailor the

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to fit the

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’ personalities and circumstances. Based on the general interests and needs of the class,

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can choose to focus on certain areas of

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to make the lessons more relevant and interesting.

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, if the

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are more interested in Mathematics and Science,

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can incorporate more advanced exercises and other Mathematics and Science knowledge outside of the textbook to satisfy the

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’ curiosity.

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more enthusiasm is shown in Social Sciences,

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can perform

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of well-written literature pieces, or even conduct a field trip to museums to learn more about History outside

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. Teaching pupils of various interests the same

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, they would not have time to dive deep into the areas of studies that they are really passionate about. While critics have reasons to support their claim, I still believe

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should be the final

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because

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need to cover basic knowledge across all subjects for

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more holistic development of their

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before guiding them to research more about their favourite fields. School children of all backgrounds should be capable of carrying out basic calculations, achieving

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degree of literature comprehension, and having a basic knowledge of Natural and Social Sciences for future daily-life applications. More importantly, a lot of modern-life problems need to be solved based on multidisciplinary principles, requiring people to have both Science and Humanities expertise.

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, these basic principles need to be standardized across all schools by the parliament. In conclusion,

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directly carry out the

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in class, the authority should still be responsible for designing the standardized

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for all schools. To avoid developing a watered-down

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that may not be as relevant to

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,

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can take

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from

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and encourage subject tutors to develop more advanced programmes for gifted

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who are eager to learn more.