Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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great inventions.

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about people in the past, so their thoughts, beliefs, and way of thinking

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other subjects to determine and clarify context along with the complex conditions. There will be always

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of giving attention to

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Cultural heritage
Historical perspective
Analytical skills
Contextual understanding
Technological advancements
STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
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Job market
Climate crisis
Cultural identity
Critical thinking
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