Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to gat a university education. Some people believw that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

A poorly is a major problem around the world. It has been observed in many countries that,students who belong to poor families have difficulties to an arrange money for their studies.Some people believe that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

by the

education

authorities some facility should be provided for them.I agree with a notion to a large extent,my statement will be elaborated

further

.

To begin

with, why the poor

children

have thought to survive while

study

Wrong verb form

studying

show examples

. To answer it, there are many things needed for

education

,like rent house,

meal

Fix the agreement mistake

meals

show examples

,dinner,electricity

bill

Fix the agreement mistake

bills

show examples

,

book

Fix the agreement mistake

books

show examples

.These types

all-expense

Change preposition

of all-expense

show examples

quite

Add a missing verb

are quite

show examples

difficult for poor pupils to arrange.

Therefore

, the

education

system could supply a free hostel room along with lunch as well as dinner, and free books.

For example

, in India, the government colleges have all the free facilities for a tribal community.

Furthermore

, a university can offer some part-time jobs to these students,towards which they can earn some money for their daily needs.

For instance

,70% of American pupils do a part-time job in their own campus like in the library, canteen.

Thus

,

this

idea can be beneficial for

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

rural

children

.

On the other hand

, we cannot ignore the facilities of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

government universities .Nowadays, authorities

provides

Change the verb form

provide

show examples

a large amount of a scholarship to all poor as well middle-class

children

for their all needs,

also

Correct pronoun usage

they also

show examples

,have a free hostel including meals.

For example

, the Canadian government supplies 200 dollars per student. In conclusion,it has been accounted that tribal

children

have

a

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

difficulty surviving while

education

.I believe that

this

situation can be solved by authorities.

Hence

, poor pupils can complete their

study

Fix the agreement mistake

studies

show examples

without struggle.