Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to gat a university education. Some people believw that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

A poorly is a major problem around the world. It has been observed in many countries that,students who belong to poor families have difficulties to an arrange money for their studies.Some people believe that

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authorities some facility should be provided for them.I agree with a notion to a large extent,my statement will be elaborated

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with, why the poor

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have thought to survive while

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. To answer it, there are many things needed for

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,like rent house,

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,dinner,electricity

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quite

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difficult for poor pupils to arrange.

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, the

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system could supply a free hostel room along with lunch as well as dinner, and free books.

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, in India, the government colleges have all the free facilities for a tribal community.

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, a university can offer some part-time jobs to these students,towards which they can earn some money for their daily needs.

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,70% of American pupils do a part-time job in their own campus like in the library, canteen.

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idea can be beneficial for

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rural

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, we cannot ignore the facilities of

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government universities .Nowadays, authorities

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a large amount of a scholarship to all poor as well middle-class

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for their all needs,

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,have a free hostel including meals.

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, the Canadian government supplies 200 dollars per student. In conclusion,it has been accounted that tribal

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difficulty surviving while

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situation can be solved by authorities.

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, poor pupils can complete their

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without struggle.