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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, school should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#children #languages #school #force
Student
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The student
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 should not be forced to
study
 an additional
language
, because the younger generation
are
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is
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 not capable to
study
 an additional
language
. I agree with
this
argue
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argument
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 because I think the young can feel tough in studying. In spite of some people says it’s important to learn a
second
language
.
Nowdays
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, It is
very
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a very
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 important capability of languages for global life. On the one hand, some people insist
students
 have to
study
 a
language
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from
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form
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from
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 another country when they
younger
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are younger
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. Parents of the young would like to think it’s helpful
their
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for their
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 kids. They think it’s more
efficiency
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 to
study
 a
second
language
 earlier when
students
 are younger. If the
students
 are able to learn another
tongue
, they will have a variety of
choice
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choices
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 about their jobs and life.
One
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 the other hand, there is
argument
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an argument
the argument
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 the younger generation should not be forced to learn an additional
language
.
Students
 are not capable to speak another
tongue
. The younger even can not speak their mother
tongue
 fluently. If they are forced to
study
 more
language
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languages
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, they will feel pressure from learning a variety of languages. It could
be take
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 lack
self-esteem
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of self-esteem
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 and
actually
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,actually
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 I
was experience
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was experiencing
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 that.
Therefore
 school should
encourages
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encourage
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students
practice
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to practice
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 particularly in their mother
tongue
. In my opinion,
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the school
a school
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school
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schools
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 should not force the younger generation to
study
 an additional
language
. The young are not capable to learn another
tongue
.
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The school
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School
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Schools
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 have to focus on teaching
mother
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their mother
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tongue
.
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