you have seen an advertisement in Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for 6 month in look after their 6 year old child. write a letter to the parents. In your letter. - explain why you would like to the job - give details for why you would be a suitable person for employee -say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir, I hope your and your family's health is good. I am from Gujarat, India.Yesterday, while I read the newspaper at that time I read

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news. I loved

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and

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I worked as a

child

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caretaker in many organisations and

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family so I am a well experienced for

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job

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and I would like to prefer

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type

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job

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, I am a perfect employee for

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job

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because I have a vast knowledge of

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type

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job

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and I am loving

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since childhood and

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I have experience of 3 years so I would like to prefer

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type

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job

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and I will be very careful about your

child

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24/7 days. I treat your

child

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like the best friend and we enjoy it ourselves a lot on all days.

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I am so happy if you would like to prefer me for

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type

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my best

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, in the evening or while on holiday and on special occasion days while I will be free

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I will visit Australian cultural places and

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historical places and sometimes when I have some leisure time I spend it in the garden and in the cinema with friends and

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sometimes with your

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on children funfair. yours faithfully,

Viram

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Vikram

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

217 words

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