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Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are more important in addition to good qualifications for a job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often said,
the
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the
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 employee
are
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 trying to build their soft
skills
 as they strongly believe that
it
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these
skills
 give them a competitive advantage
in addition
 to technical
skills
. I am completely agreed with the fact that employees should have
required
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 communication and interpersonal
skills
 to exceed in their professional careers. We
also
 cannot deny the fact that technical
skills
 are equally important as only having
a soft
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soft skills
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skills
 will not help employees especially when their job demands knowledge regarding different tools and
skills
for example
, when a person is working in the research department so it is highly important for him to know research tools like
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 SPSS, STATA, Power BI etc.
On the other hand
, having good
know how
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 about different tools is
also
 not
enought
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enough
, one should have good social
skills
 which can help them to handle different situations and teams.
for example
, if a person is really good in excel but
he
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also
know
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 how to manage teams, how to communicate and motivate employees to perform well. In conclusion, I would
reaffrim
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reaffirm
 my statement that
now a days
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 soft
skills
 are equally demanded as hard
skills
 to achieve
sucess
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success
 in professional life.
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