Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There exist
two
beliefs due to constructing new
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of new
buildings
. the first
one
is insisting on keeping the old style
of the previous houses, and the other one
believes in freedom of the choice for construction style
of new buildings
. Regarding the economical condition and aesthetics of the city
architecture
, this
essay a moderation between Change preposition
in this
two
building styles would be the best choice. In the following paragraph
both ideas are discussed and my opinion would be elaborated.
On the Add a comma
,paragraph
one
hand
many people consider following the older Add a comma
,hand
architecture
of the previous buildings
would maintain the harmony of the city
, and therefore
it
beauty. For Change the pronoun
its
further
explanation of the given opinion, we can delve into the regulations which were imposed on the building industry in some historical cities, for maintaining the ecosystem and the historical texture of the city
. For instance
, in Isfahan
there are some new regulations for building apartments taller than 5 floors, in order to preserve the natural and historical harmony of the Add a comma
,Isfahan
city
. Therefore
, new construction projects are obliged to follow these rules, because of natural
and historical resources of Isfahan.
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the natural
On the other hand
, some other believe that by constructing building
in Add an article
a building
the building
the
new form and Correct article usage
a
style
, modernization can emerge in one
city
, and helps its economy and enviroments
. There exist some cities Correct your spelling
environment
environments
which their
old structure of Correct pronoun usage
whose
architecture
will not welcome new economical and residential situation
, due to the growth of the population and advent of the new technology. Fix the agreement mistake
situations
Therefore
, they must try renovation in their construction. Dubai, as very
advanced technological Add an article
a very
the very
city
, could be an outstanding example. If the muncipility
of Dubai had not hosted the new building Correct your spelling
municipality
style
, Dubai would have faced sever
economical Correct your spelling
severe
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drawbacks
draw backs
.
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drawbacks
This
essay believes that depending on the circumstances and conditions of any city
, making a balance between the two
decisions would be the best method. Considering the economical growth and preserving
the historical or natural sights, some regulations could contribute a Replace the word
preservation
city
to
improve its status. Fix the infinitive
apply
For example
a city
like Nowshar
host many modern Correct your spelling
Nowshera
buildings
with exagarated
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exaggerated
architecture
in order to prvoke
tourists into it. Correct your spelling
provoke
However
on
the other hand, constructing a building Add the comma(s)
,on
which
does not follow the previous Correct pronoun usage
that
style
of the Nowshar
near the Correct your spelling
Nowshera
coast line
, for preserving the resources is illegal.
In conclusion, moderation between the Correct your spelling
coastline
two
opinion
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opinions
of
the building Change preposition
on
style
, whether following the old guidelines or a freer method, would be the best decision for any city
. This
helps cities to improve both in
economical and Change preposition
apply
enviormental
conditions.Correct your spelling
environmental
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