You are applying to get admitted to an educational programme at a university abroad. Specify what you want to study and write a motivation letter, including the following points- • What attracted you to this particular programme, reason for wanting to study- your motivations and ambitions • How your current study is relevant and what your academic achievements are • Why you are suitable- extracurricular activities, hobbies and other experience related to your choice of programme.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apply for admission to the course on “English literature and culture”, which was published

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the university website and will take place in London. I have always been interested

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studying languages and I believe I am an ideal candidate. I am 18 years of age and have just completed my final exams in

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secondary school. I achieved exceptionally high grades in school subjects. I am extremely motivated to achieve a C2 certificate for English and to learn more about English and American literature and culture. I studied English culture and literature at school and I am keen to expand my knowledge of these subjects.

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, I participated in three “Erasmus ” projects and have the opportunity to communicate with people from other countries. I think I am well-suited for

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, punctual and communicative person. I hope that you consider me for entry and look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anna Georgieva

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