In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

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domestic task,

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necessary. while more and more folks

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shopping as a hobby.

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trend , but

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of things. A fashion

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a very big change in our country.

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positive

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and feel our country proud.

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, doing shopping

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a person healthy-wealthy.

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people

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tend to do exercise and do their daily chores in

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comfort zone, while shopping is

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zone and try to walk and burn their calories.

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make a very positive change for lazy

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Your opinion

The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuel should be the most important global priority today. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

: For many , shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others . People , however, in the past mostly visited shopping malls when necessary . To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?

You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. •Describe the vacation spot you have chosen . •Explain how you plan to spend time there. •Invite your friend to join on your vacation

Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?