In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
It is said that in the past shopping was
daily
domestic task, Add an article
a daily
the daily
however
they only buy Add a comma
,however
a
Correct article usage
apply
things
which Correct the article-noun agreement
thing
is
necessary. while more and more folks Correct subject-verb agreement
are
now a days
regard Correct the word
nowadays
a
shopping as a hobby. Remove the article
apply
This
essay will not only highlight that shopping is positive
trend , but Add an article
a positive
also
give specific reasons.
Firstly
, In this
era shopping is become a craze for people
and all are attracting
by different Wrong verb form
attracted
kind
of things. A fashion Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
desiger
is growing up in the glamorous world. Correct your spelling
designer
For instance
, many individuals are making there
career in fashion Replace the word
their
designing
and Replace the word
design
this
make
a very big change in our country. Change the verb form
makes
Hence
, it is very
positive Correct article usage
a very
develpoment
for our nation because they are making Correct your spelling
development
globally
and feel our country proud.
Correct pronoun usage
it globally
Secondly
, doing shopping make
a person healthy-wealthy. Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
Morever
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
now a days
Correct the word
nowadays
people
tend to do exercise and do their daily chores in there
comfort zone, while shopping is Correct your spelling
their
best
Correct article usage
the best
theraphy
for Correct your spelling
therapy
people
to get active this
way atleast
they try to come out of Correct your spelling
at least
comfort
zone and try to walk and burn their calories. Correct pronoun usage
their comfort
For instance
, when we walk and to
up down on stairs that Change preposition
apply
also
Add a missing verb
is also
a
one type of Remove the article
apply
exersice
and Correct your spelling
exercise
people
will do without
any Correct pronoun usage
it without
hestitaion
because shopping is very vital for Correct your spelling
hesitation
mankinds
and they love to do it.
In conclusion, I agree with Correct your spelling
mankind
this
trend, Although
its
make a very positive change for lazy Correct pronoun usage
it
people
and also
make
them Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
physicaly
active.Correct your spelling
physically
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