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You recently attended a conference and would like to give a presentation to your colleagues about it. Write a letter to your manager and include: The topic of the conference Why you want to present about it When it could be done

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Dear
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Smith, I am writing his letter in relation to a meeting that
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 participated in
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this
 meeting, the main idea was about how to increase customer services of companies.
Besides
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this
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Therefore
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 would like to make a presentation to my colleagues to share some experience and knowledge that
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 could gain in the meeting.
In addition
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 have chance to discuss
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the topic and make
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professional
 plans to increase the
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 of customers in our company. It would be great if
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 can have one day to arrange some ideas and prepare for my presentation. After that,
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 can organise a meeting
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 two hours to present and discuss with my colleagues.
For instance
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 may spend one hour
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presenting
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the topic and another hour will be used for discussion and making plans. I hope that you can agree with my ideas and arrange
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shedule
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schedule
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 to take part in the meeting. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Trang Hoang.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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