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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such services.

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In recent years, some people
think
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have thought
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 that the
translation
 of language applications will be more positive than negative
to
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apply
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use
.
On the other hand
,
It
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There
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 will be some disadvantages
such
 as the internet or phone to
use
. From my perspective, I believe that there are advantages more than advantages in these areas.
Firstly
, it is generally accepted that there is a benefit for some individuals who stay in a foreign country that they can not speak a different language.
For example
, foreigners will
use
translation
apps
 to communicate with native individuals.
In addition
, some communities might argue that it will be negative for some foreigners who need to speak another accent because they do not speak that language.
Secondly
, users might think that
translation
apps
 will snatch the translator's occupation. That may be true but, for many communities around the world using
translation
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a translation
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 will be more convenient than a translator.
For instance
, it might be a hard and a waste of money if users
use
 only translators to work for them.
Thirdly
, it is often acknowledged that translators will make a sense of accent that will correct in human speaking.
However
,
translation
apps
 are obviously correct because they have programs and translators will make mistakes. Illustrated by users who are travelling around the world and have to
use
translation
apps
 because it is comfortable to carry because it is on their phones.
Nevertheless
, It may depend on people's convenience to
use
 any choices. In conclusion, From my point of view, I agree that using
translation
apps
 is a good idea
to
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apply
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use
 because I like to travel to countries where I can not speak their accent and it will help me to communicate with native individuals.
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