A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction do you agree or disagree?

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Earning a higher income is the ultimate aim in the workplace. Generally, people think that high earnings give a good life. I strongly disagree with
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statement that is satisfaction much more important than pay scale. I believe that it takes to achieve a higher position and
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helps to keep our health issues.
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with, self-satisfaction is more important in the work we do whether it is paid or not. Without
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job
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fulfillment
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it is very difficult to continue in the long run.
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, it won’t support our future growth and development and
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not able to achieve promotions due to temporary switch over only because of high salary.
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, my friend Sasi who is working as an IT developer changed his company for getting high pay. Now he feels very frustrated about his current
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and not satisfied with his current position.
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, health is
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one of the major factors for every human. If they do a
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without their peace of mind it will affect them mentally and physically. For earning a high salary they have to spend more time on their tasks whether they are interested or not. Later, they suffer some health issues like mental depression, obesity, blood pressure, etc.
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, one of my friends suffered from a heart attack due to continuous pressure in his workplace. To sum up, salary is important for a
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but satisfaction is much more necessary than earlier. I strongly believe that work achievement should be prioritised overpay in the workplace.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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