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In many countries, people would rather rent a house instead of buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting

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Some people would rather rent a
house
instead
 of buying one. Renting a
house
 is more flexible than buying a
house
 in some cases, but
definitley
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definitely
 everything has advantages and disadvantages. Speaking about a student who travelled abroad to study for 4 to 5 years, it is better for him to rent a
house
 rather than
buying
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buy
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 one due to it is not his home country and sudden changes are always expected.
For example
, when
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the corona
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corona virus
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coronavirus
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 appeared, many students who were studying abroad went back to their home countries and chose to continue online to stay safe beside their families and loved ones. In
this
 case, renting was a better choice.
On the other hand
, the disadvantage of renting is that you will always be in
threat
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the threat
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 that the
house
 owner would decide at
anytime
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any time
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 to give you a probation period to leave the
house
, so you will not be
hundered
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hundred
percent
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per cent
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 settled. In conclusion, Renting a
house
 is more flexible for people because it gives them the privilege of being able to move and change areas easily; Unlike if you are the owner of the
house
, you will have to sell it to be able to move each time, unless you are a billionaire and can buy houses
eveywhere
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everywhere
 you want to go.
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