Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past

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Most people agree that

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should

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their

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, but personally, I believe that nowadays it seems the

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children

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towards their

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or even for their parents has decreased. I feel

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way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following

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with, the new theories about upbringing the

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. It has been said that parents should not have

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strict rules for their

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and they should not punish them.

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, as a response, the child will not fear anyone including his

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or he will not feel ashamed of his

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so, he feels free to act in the way he wants. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of

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. I had a colleague at work and he had a 9 years old

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, somedays he brought his

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with him at work. The

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was always free to do whatever he wants; even

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though he

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had a rude

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in front of others but he was never been punished or even taught how to act in a good manner. One day, while he was playing around, he said a bad word to our manager and

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, but his dad said nothing to him and has only apologized to the manager.

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are no longer strict especially

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the period of Covid-19 because of the online classes. When the

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see they can behave and speak with

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in their own mode without being warned, they will continue their way of acting and behaving.

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, the

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I was talking about, one day had an online class. While he was in the class, his teacher said something that he did not like and after shouting in the microphone, he left the class without permission. Of course, his teacher asked his father but he had no answer for his

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he said nothing to his

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. Based on

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experience, I strongly think that the new generation has no

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for their

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and for other people in general. In conclusion, I think nowadays

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have no

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for their

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is because they do not have a strict upbringing at home from their parents and at school from their

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, and

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is shown in their

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towards others, even in front of their

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Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past

Your opinion

In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessment. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Q. People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?