You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my happiness. On 17th April, I and my friends had a dinner party in your eating house. As your restaurant was recommended by my cousin. I
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celebrated my 25th birthday on Sunday. I booked a table in advance to throw a party for friends. We ordered
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vegetarian
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with some starters and
deserts
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at the end. Our foodstuffs
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very quickly and
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was totally warm and delicious. I would really appreciate
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your staff as they were very friendly and polite as well.
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forgotten as
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seasonal and fresh fruits and made a delicious fruits salad. We were extremely contented to receive the kind of service that we had received during the dinner. My friends and I had
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night at your eating house. We loved to visit your restaurant again. All the best to you and your restaurant. Yours faithfully, Mallika Wadhwa
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  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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