In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are advantages and disadvantages of renting a home.

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century,half of the population likes to rent their home rather than
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.Living in luxury shelters is
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desire.so they prefer rental,which has lots of benefits even though there
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drawbacks too.   On the one hand,they get profits and save
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.
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,In Bhutan,buying
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a house
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is expensive so they prefer to stay in
rental
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the rental
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.so
owner
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has more likely to earn.From my perspective,they can make more friends like those who are staying in
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. So it may create
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society in the future and there will be more
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to settle because of great people around.
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cons while living in
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. Because sometimes it defers to
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.
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,some
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are strict
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rules and regulations.They don't allow tenants to paint
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a favorite
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color
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on the wall.Even not allowing blust music etc...In
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,some rooms will be
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size
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and
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have good facilities etc...
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,there will be less chance of people living in
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. So concluding the point,that nowadays people are choosing to rental houses and some purchasing.Both are having merits and demerits as mentioned above
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earnings
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and saving for the
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.And meanwhile no freedom from
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial commitment
  • down payment
  • initial costs
  • allocate resources
  • maintenance costs
  • mobility
  • relocate
  • market fluctuations
  • property value
  • building equity
  • appreciate in value
  • asset
  • personalization
  • restrictions
  • rental increases
  • lease renewal
  • financial instability
  • housing budgets
  • long-term security
  • landlord
  • lease agreement
  • equity
  • substantial
  • property ownership
  • property market
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