In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are advantages and disadvantages of renting a home.

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century,half of the population likes to rent their home rather than

purchasing

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.Living in luxury shelters is

human

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desire.so they prefer rental,which has lots of benefits even though there

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drawbacks too. On the one hand,they get profits and save

financial

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financially

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For instance

,In Bhutan,buying

house

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a house

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is expensive so they prefer to stay in

rental

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the rental

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.so

owner

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the owner

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has more likely to earn.From my perspective,they can make more friends like those who are staying in

rental

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a rental

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. So it may create

good

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a good

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society in the future and there will be more

attraction

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to settle because of great people around.

On the other hand

,there

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cons while living in

rental

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a rental

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. Because sometimes it defers to

owner

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the owner

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For example

,some

owner

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owners

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are strict

for

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about

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rules and regulations.They don't allow tenants to paint

there

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their

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a favorite

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favorite

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color

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on the wall.Even not allowing blust music etc...In

additional

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,some rooms will be

limited

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the limited

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size

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and

doesn't

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have good facilities etc...

furthermore

,there will be less chance of people living in

rental

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a rental

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. So concluding the point,that nowadays people are choosing to rental houses and some purchasing.Both are having merits and demerits as mentioned above

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earnings

unlimited

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and saving for the

futures

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.And meanwhile no freedom from

proprietor

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the proprietor

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28Grammar mistakes
 

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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down payment
initial costs
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maintenance costs
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market fluctuations
property value
building equity
appreciate in value
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personalization
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rental increases
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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are advantages and disadvantages of renting a home.

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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