Culture is the same around the world. Discuss the reasons and shed some light on whether it is a positive or negative trend and give your opinion.

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significant heritage and value for all countries

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worldwide

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is because all

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have their own traditions and customs which have been inherited from and taught by their ancestors. There is

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that

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is similar to each other around the world.

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essay will discuss

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for

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statement and explore why

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brings out

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impact.

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, globalisation and

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media and

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which have been followed by all citizens of diverse provinces make

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imitate other

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life habits.

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, in my citizenship place due to frequently watching numerous

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shows and movies

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other countries individuals are getting used to

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Christmas and Valentine's Day even

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are not our holidays.

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could be demonstrated by giving each other presents and celebrating

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other

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as American and British do.

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, from ones from all over the world can work in one company even they have various languages, traditions and

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culture

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cultures

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. To illustrate, if

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persons

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are working in the same

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organization

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other Kazakh

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, Kazakh

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will celebrate Russian holidays which is called Shrovetide. So, globalisation ,

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media and working

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around the world in the same organisation make

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to

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adapt to each other's customs and holidays.

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negative

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impact on

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since

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are getting used to

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minor attention to their own

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which is not proper for their cultural heritage.

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,

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currently

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ones are travelling and studying abroad.

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makes

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to be exposed and experienced

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other

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' lifestyles.

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, students who have

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in

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after returning to Kazakhstan

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to celebrate

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Halloween

and Thanksgiving Day.

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,

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are

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getting used to

wear

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the same clothes

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other

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do

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because the same worldwide fashion magazines have been read by all community.

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be negatively impact

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on

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human beings since not everyone can afford

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and

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abroad

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resulted

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in not acceptance by other citizens

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foreign alien

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been consequenced in tensions and conflicts. To conclude ,

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is significant for everyone.

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, there is

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believe

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that

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is getting globalised and getting being the same

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worldwide

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essay explained

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the reasons

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for that

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as the same

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, media, working

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in diverse

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nations

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in the same organisations and travelling , studying abroad. If the certain

society

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will follow

to

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and inherent other

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' cultures

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will bring tensions and forgetting their own cultures.