You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice

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Dear Sathi, Hope
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letter finds you very well. It's been a long time not talking with you. Today I am writing
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letter to ask for some suggestions for a new job in the child care field. As you may know, recently I am working as a carer in the disability
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. It's been a long time since I am working as a helper in the Ashfield disability facility. Now I feel like I am stuck in
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sector and want to change the work.
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nowadays I am experiencing back pain because of a long shift and haby work in the workplace. I
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finished my diploma in early childhood recently, and I am thinking of changing my career in Early childhood service. You have been in
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field for five years,
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have a lot of experience, and know many
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. I really need your help to find me a good working environment in
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field. It would be very helpful if you suggest to me some
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where I can apply for a job. As I am new here and haven't prepared my resume yet, you may give some ideas about the things that should be mentioned on the excellent resume. I look forward to hearing from you at your convenience time. Warm wishes
Jaanni
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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