During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir I hope

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letter finds you well. I am Simhachalam Gouroju from Hyderabad, whom you met on the plane from Doha to Boston on 25th March. I believe you remember me now. It was a great experience travelling with you. As per our conversation, I am writing

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letter to request you let me know if there are any job openings in one of your restaurants. I am mainly interested in customer service or any supervisor role as I hold a diploma in Hotel Management and got 3 years of experience in the same field at one of the International Hotels, in Boston. In my current role, I handle a team of 10 members and strive to provide the best possible service to all the customers.

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, I received multiple rewards during my journey with ABC Hotel, as a token of appreciation for my excellent customer handling skills.

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, I believe I might be a good fit for any customer service or supervisor role

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available at your restaurant. I have enclosed my resume for additional details. I will be looking forward to seeing your response. Thank you in advance. Yours Sincerely Simhachalam Gouroju

simhagourojuTue Apr 19 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

197 words

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chain of restaurants
potential job opportunity
relevant experience
managerial role
customer service
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unique skills
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