The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Salmon
begin life as eggs on a pebbly riverbed, hidden among reeds in the slow-moving upper reaches of a river. After five to six months the eggs hatch into 'fry For approximately the Use synonyms
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four years, these baby Linking Words
salmon
will live in the lower faster-flowing waters of their river. During Use synonyms
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time they measure between three and eight centimetres in length.
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reach twelve to fifteen centimetres, they are termed 'smolt', and at Use synonyms
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time they migrate Linking Words
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downriver into the open sea. After five years at ,sea the Linking Words
salmon
will have grown to adult size, which is between seventy and seventy-six centimetres. They Use synonyms
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begin swimming back to their birthplace, where they will lay their eggs, and the cycle starts anew.
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salmon
passes through three distinct physical stages as it grows to maturity. Each of these stages takes place in a very different aquatic location. It is noteworthy that the first two stages of Use synonyms
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fish's life occur in a freshwater environment, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
third
stage is lived in saltwater.Linking Words
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