You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the poor customer service I have experienced with your bank. My name is Hardik Vyas and my account number is 123432342. I have placed a request for

cheque

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book from

online

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netbanking

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net banking

option before two weeks.

However

, I have not yet received the

cheque book

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. Without cheques, I am having

very

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hard time to

pefrome

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perform

my bank transactions.

Hence

, I would like to check how long I will have to wait to get it. If you can let me know

approximate

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date

then

it would be helpful.

Also

this

very

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serious issue of

extremly

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extremely

poor delivery service toward your loyal customers. Delaying

checkbook

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delivery impacts badly.

Thus

, I would want to know what

measure

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you would take to prevent

such

issue

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issues

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in future. Hoping to get

resolution

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a resolution

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this

matter as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Hardik Vyas

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0Word repetition
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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