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Nuclear power is used both for weapons of mass destruction and the production of cheap, clean energy. Do the advantages of nuclear power outweigh the disadvantages?

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The three diagrams showcase the modifications that made at West
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School
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 since its building in 1950. In general, the main changes had taken place in the western territory of the diagram in all three years and the
school
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 building had not altered apart, during the years. In terms of the
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 diagram, in 1950, houses had occupied approximately a quarter zone. But when it had come in 1980, the car
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 and science block constructions had been built as a replacement for houses. In 2010, the car
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 had obsessed a massive locality of the western field. Farmland had been removed in both 1980 and 2010 because of the sports field and car
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. The other notable changes involve
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. In 1950, the
school
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 had been a single, but, in 1980 and 2010, the
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 had been altered as the
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1980 and 2010. The sports field and playground had been bigger in 1950 and 1980, but, in 2010, these had been diminished.
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