You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Muhamad Abdul. I am taking a part-time evening
course
. I am having a hard time keeping up with
this
course
. I am afraid I cannot continue the
course
. My problem is, I have a full-time job, from 9am – 5pm. Sometimes, I am asked to stay extra hours, to finish up the rest of the work.
That is
because the holidays are coming up soon.
Also
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I have to do some work preparations for the
next
day. At night when I get home, I am too tired to even prepare
a
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dinner for myself.
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I have no time to study for
this
course
. I would
like
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drop
this
course
this
quarter.
Then
take it again the
next
quarter. So, please accept my situation. Thank you for your cooperation Sincerely M. Abdul
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