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Do you feel it is better for young people leaving school to study further at university or go straight into the workplace? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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In my opinion, it is always better for students to pursue higher
education
 than to start a career right after school. There are several benefits of attaining a university
education
. I believe so because of my personal experiences and understanding of the same.
Firstly
 , all professionally skilled jobs demand at least a basic college
education
 to ensure
speacialized
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specialized
specialised
 knowledge and
skills
 in employees.
Secondly
, a lot of jobs require specialized
skills
. Specialized
skills
 are offered by colleges and universities, and these
skills
 help the students to stand out among the general population of job seekers. Jobs
which
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that
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 have specialized
skills
 have no substitute and companies and businesses will not accept job seekers without these
skills
.
For example
, would a company hire a student to become an electrician when the student has absolutely no knowledge of how electricity flows or works?
Lastly
, higher
education
 will open opportunities for students to get better remuneration. Job seekers with
college
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a college
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education
 as well as specialized
skills
 would be able to attract better salary packages for themselves as they would have more to offer the potential employers than
an
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apply
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unskilled
worker
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workers
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. In summary, a student with a university
education
 can have a more rewarding and fulfilling career with better remuneration.
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