‘For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write.’ How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view?

The given diagram describes
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of making
paper
. It is seen that the
wooden
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chips that are either made from wooden logs from trees or purchased from the market, go to the digester. The digester converts wooden chips into
pulp
, which goes to washers for washing. After that, the
pulp
is screened and the clean
pulp
is used for two purposes. The
first
purpose is to create
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paper
for boxes. The
pulp
goes to
pulp
former followed by
pulp
dyers and reels of
pulp
are made. The reels are
then
cut and
paper
bales are made out of
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. The
second
purpose is to make refined
paper
for printing. The clean
pulp
then
goes to
pulp
cleaners and
then
to
pulp
dryers. After that,
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is pressed and
paper
is formed through pressing, which is dried and
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dried
paper
is rolled as a finished product.
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