Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs like heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to freely buy other more socially acceptable drugs like tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and consumption of ‘hard’ drugs should be applied to other more widely tolerated drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

Drugs

with severe negative effects and the

ones

that are causing addictions, like heroin and cocaine, have been banned and strict punishments are applied to

people

who are

trafficing

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trafficking

or using them;

however

, the

ones

that cause milder dependency, like

tobbaco

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tobacco

and alcohol, are being used without any prohibition. It is argued that the same law should be passed for them. I am completely in agreement with

this

view.

First

of all, all recreational

drugs

can cause damage to human health and these soft

ones

are not excluded. A good example of it is

the

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lung cancer, which results in many deaths in smokers.

Besides

that, many

people

are suffering from

alcohol induced

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liver diseases, which leads to liver transplantations.

Thus

,

although

they have been viewed as soft

drugs

, their consequences are pretty serious. Added to

this

is the mental aspect which is being affected by the dependency and the tolerance of these

drugs

.

For example

,

ones

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usually start with

smoke

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smoking

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a cigarette a day and end

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a packet per day.

Therefore

, due to mental and physical addiction and their side effects, imposing a law against these substances is in

people

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best interest.

Moreover

, victims of

drugs

are not only drug users but

also

their close contacts. The reason for those

people

being suffered is the impact that humans can have on

eachother

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each other

.

For instance

, if a family member has alcohol use disorder and comes back home drunk

everynight

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every night

, other members will be annoyed by

this

behaviour, especially if they are children. To exemplify

further

, passive smokers are at

a

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great risk of lung cancers even if they are not smokers.

Consequently

, because

people

are affecting

eachother

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each other

, giving permission to some to use these substances is ignoring other

people

's

right

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. To sum up, applying the same

detterent

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deterrent

as hard

drugs

to milder

ones

is vital to keep

people

safe. I am convinced that the disadvantages they have brought for both users and non-users are important enough to prohibit them.