In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some countries which their people believe

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the high importance of devoting large sums of money to building the

railway

lines for connecting

cities

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trains

. While some others say that the money should be spent to develop current public transport. Personally, I believe that constructing the

railway

lines could solve

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deeper problems. By improving existing public transport some serious problems could be solved,

such

as

air

pollution

and

traffic

jam. As we know, some part of the

air

pollution

is in order to old public vehicles, which are not able to filter some dangerous contaminants. So by replacing

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old public vehicles

such

as taxis and buses with new ones,

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would be less polluted, and

also

our life and other species would not be in danger.

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expanding the streets and considering particular ways for public transportation vehicles and raising the capacity of

trains

, the

traffic

congestion could be decreased, because people find public transportation faster and more affordable, So they prefer using

trains

and buses rather than their private cars.

However

, it should not be ignored that many people have to immigrate to larger

cities

for the job in order to

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fast ways to travel and come back to their

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on a daily basis. Constructing the

railway

for fast

trains

between

cities

is the more necessary way to prevent getting empty of

habitants

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in small

cities

and villages and a higher rate of migration from there to metropolitan

cities

. Nowadays, commuters prefer to immigrate to larger towns for their job, because they cannot arrive at work punctually, so if we improve existing public transports

air

pollution

and

traffic

jam would be solved temporarily, because of the growing population in large

cities

. To sum up, I say that by devoting more part of

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to construct the

railway

between

cities

for fast

trains

, one of the main reasons, which can cause

air

pollution

,

traffic

jam and evacuation of small

cities

will be addressed, by the

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we will not see much migration for jobs due to lack of quick access to larger towns.