Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays,
cities
face Use synonyms
issues
like Use synonyms
traffic
and housing Use synonyms
problems
. It is often said that relocating the big Use synonyms
companies
and Use synonyms
factories
along with their workers to the Use synonyms
countryside
would eliminate Use synonyms
such
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issues
in these Use synonyms
cities
. In my opinion, the answer is not in favour of Use synonyms
this
approach.
Big Linking Words
companies
and Use synonyms
factories
generate employment in the Use synonyms
cities
and help Use synonyms
people
in maintaining their standard of living. WhileUse synonyms
,
taking away these opportunities from them can result in Remove the comma
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further
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problems
like less income and would lead them to travel to the Use synonyms
countryside
for work. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
people
may feel homesick if they would not opt for up-down of their daily travel and might visit home only on weekends due to the long distance between Use synonyms
cities
and the Use synonyms
countryside
. Even, these Use synonyms
people
may lose their jobs as Use synonyms
companies
would be interested in hiring local Use synonyms
people
in the Use synonyms
countryside
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
idea would not appropriately target the Linking Words
traffic
and housing Use synonyms
issues
but rather will add to other Use synonyms
problems
. These Use synonyms
issues
can be taken care of by other better solutions if the government looks at the matter.
Talking about another possible solution to reduce Use synonyms
traffic
in Use synonyms
cities
and accommodation Use synonyms
problems
, the government must build new properties by acquiring the open space available. Use synonyms
This
way, the Linking Words
cities
can be Use synonyms
further
developed if there is Linking Words
such
construction of new housing flats giving more space to Linking Words
people
residing here. Looking at the issue of Use synonyms
traffic
, it can be dealt with by widening the Use synonyms
roads
or reconstructing the bad state of Use synonyms
roads
so that vehicles can run smoothly. Another way could be, to introduce innovative ways Use synonyms
in
running of the vehicles on the Change preposition
apply
roads
. Use synonyms
For example
, an odd-even formula so that number of running cars on the Linking Words
roads
can be less.
In conclusion, moving the big Use synonyms
companies
and Use synonyms
factories
and workers to the Use synonyms
countryside
would lead to other Use synonyms
problems
like reduced employment and low income for Use synonyms
such
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people
. Whereas, solutions like widening of the Use synonyms
roads
and construction of the new flats seem to be helpful in order to curb Use synonyms
such
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issues
in the Use synonyms
cities
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I fully disagree with the idea of movement of the Linking Words
companies
and Use synonyms
factories
to the Use synonyms
countryside
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite