You want to book a hotel recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. • explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay • ask what will be included in the price • enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir, A very good day to you. I Prabhjot Singh, am a resident of 123 PAU, Campus, Ludhiana. I am writing

this

letter in order to book a

room

at your property.

Moreover

, I have some sort of queries related to the accommodation. I am going to plan to stay at your hotel from the 1st of April 2022 to the 3rd of April 2022 with my wife and 2 years old son. I visited your hotel's website, but unfortunately, I was not able to get full details of the facilities provided in the premium

room

with a sea view. I want to know

that Is

breakfast is included in the cost of the premium

room

. We have a small child with us during our stay, I want a small refrigerator in the

room

so as to store some medicine

that is

required for our child. Since it is our

first

visit to the Shimla, Kindly let me know about the famous places and entertainment activities near the hotel. I shall be very thankful to you. Waiting for the

room

confirmation email. With kind regards Prabhjot Singh

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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