One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, an increasing number of
people
have become to live in large cities
rather than rural areas
, and this
causes
heavy traffic
problems in urban areas
. In this
essay, I am going to discuss two
reasons behind this
problem
and examine possible ways to address it.
To begin
with, there are two
causes
behind this
problem
. Firstly
, overpopulation of large metropolitan cities
and depopulation in the countryside are one of the major causes
of this
. Since there are few jobs in the countryside, people
move out to large cities
and look for jobs that pay better salaries. As a result
, the city population has increased and traffic
congestion happens. Secondly
, another reason for this
commuting time. In general, people
commute to their office at the same hours, around 8 to 9. This
leads to public transportations such
as trains fully packed.
I believe that there are two
possible ways to address such
issues. The first
solution is to enhance moving to rural areas
. As overpopulation in large cities
is a severe problem
, depopulation in rural areas
is critical. However
, if people
are able to find well-paid jobs in the countryside, around half of the Japanese population wants to live there. Another solution is to vary the commuting time. In fact, the most remarkable traffic
jam is caused by people
who commute to their office. Varying times of commuting may result in easing traffic
jams in the morning and the evening.
To conclude, there are two
causes
which are overpopulation in large cities
and commuting. To solve this
problem
, it is better to move to rural areas
and decrease the population of large cities
, and varying commuting time is also
effective.Submitted by Toni R on
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