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some companies have uniform for their staff which must be warn at all the times. what are the advantages for a company having a uniform.Are their benefits of having uniform for their staff.

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Needless to say that most
of
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the organisations make it obligatory for the faculty to be dressed in a formal
uniform
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 throughout their tenure. Wearing
same
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 dress ensures equality and promotes companies logo ,
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 ,limitless confidence in financial savings are the prominent perks in the favor of
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. Firms make
uniform
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 related rules in order to get multiple advantages. Primarily,
uniform
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 erodes discrimination of clothes among
staff
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members
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 and brings equality. Suffice to say, expensive clothes have become a status symbol in
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society and those who cannot afford
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 attires are usually considered inferior by their fraternity.
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, team
members
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 who get addressed
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, do not confront inequality issues irrespective of their financial status.Eventually,it unites them more strongly as a team which ultimately brings more success to the owner.
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uniform
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the uniform
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 is
imperative
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an imperative
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 way of promoting
companies
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companies'
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name
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 and
logo
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logos
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. As several workers roam around the city for commuting or other
purposers
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 in their professional dress, people indirectly notice them and their working place gets
popularity
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. From the
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 perspective,
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 not only benefits the company but the faculty
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, if not more at least
in
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 equal terms.
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,
uniform
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 helps
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high
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 expenditure of buying new attires periodically. Since
staff
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members
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 or not allowed to wear informal dresses, they are less likely to divert their money
for
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 purchasing fashionable clothes. Obviously ,the less they spend, the more they
safe
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.
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, co-workers are filled with
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 sense of belonging when they look alike in their appearance. To wear a
uniform
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 is not a norm,it sounds like carrying
a
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responsibility and reputation of a particular place which makes them more honest and dedicated. A recent survey at the TATA group of foundation Gurgaon, India, concluded that
staff
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 who wears a
uniform
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 is considerably more faithful hardworking and loyal in comparison to those who wear casual attires. All in all,uniforms have become a major part of the organisation's rules and regulations.They safeguard their
companie's
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companies
company's
 integrity and similarity, whereas, team
members
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 enjoy their saved money and glory.
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