it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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nurturing process from

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young period.

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it is believed that punishment should be involved.

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should be imposed within the limits of the norm.

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of all, punishment is important for education. Parents apply restrictions to control their kids. By doing

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, they believe that young

children

will get what right and wrong actions are faster.

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childhood helped them avoid doing wrong things.

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, punishments should be limited. Education is about growing healthy human

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and future

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of society. In fact, while punishing parents should only give

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right direction to their

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nurturing methods are appropriate. Violent and physical methods of education are

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prime examples. They usually give improper results and mostly

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the personality of the child. To summarize, punishment is the part of raising

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However

, all things should be within the bounds of decency, especially punishments.