Some people consider playing sports are beneficial for school children. Some, however, believe sport activities also have some drawbacks. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of children playing sports.

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essay will provide both advantages and disadvantages of physical activities

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children including supportive reasons. Active activities have several benefits to youngsters in both socializing and mental health.

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with, children are more likely to interact with their classmates when playing games,

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they have an opportunity to develop social skills.

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, the majority of schools have sports

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in order to improve

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and create more harmony.

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teenagers in stress reduction from study and assignments.

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has shown that physical movements lead

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to release dopamine which is known as a stress preventer hormone in

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.As a consequence, young generations have less chance of facing depression and other mental health issues in a long term.

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, physical

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as broken bones and muscle strains may occur from accidents during the plays.

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may cause student absences as they are recovering at home or the hospitals which will affect

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grades and understanding of knowledge in class.A survey conducted by schools has shown that students who have been damaged from sports usually cannot attend to the classroom for an average

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days.Obviously,

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means they missed more

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10 periods. In conclusion, joining games

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positive effects on youngsters’ mental health and social skills.

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, it may damage individuals’ bodies in case of an accident.