Some people consider playing sports are beneficial for school children. Some, however, believe sport activities also have some drawbacks. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of children playing sports.
It is believed that sports are beneficial for students.While some people opposed
this
statement as they consider it also
has negative effects.This
essay will provide both advantages and disadvantages of physical activities on
children including supportive reasons.
Active activities have several benefits to youngsters in both socializing and mental health.Change preposition
for
To begin
with, children are more likely to interact with their classmates when playing games, as a
result
they have an opportunity to develop social skills.Add the comma(s)
,result
For example
, the majority of schools have sports day
for children Fix the agreement mistake
days
participate
in order to improve Fix the infinitive
to participate
friendship
and create more harmony.Fix the agreement mistake
friendships
Moreover
, it assist
teenagers in stress reduction from study and assignments.Change the verb form
assists
A research
has shown that physical movements lead Remove the article
Research
brain
to release dopamine which is known as a stress preventer hormone in Add an article
the brain
human
.As a consequence, young generations have less chance of facing depression and other mental health issues in a long term.
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
On the other hand
, physical injury
Fix the agreement mistake
injuries
such
as broken bones and muscle strains may occur from accidents during the plays.This
may cause student absences as they are recovering at home or the hospitals which will affect the
grades and understanding of knowledge in class.A survey conducted by schools has shown that students who have been damaged from sports usually cannot attend to the classroom for an averageChange the word
their
5
days.Obviously, Change preposition
of 5
this
means they missed more Correct word choice
than
that
10 periods.
In conclusion, joining games Correct your spelling
than
has
positive effects on youngsters’ mental health and social skills.Change the verb form
have
However
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