A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses

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Dear Amanda, I hope you are doing well. As we have talked

before

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, I will be away

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foe

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vacation for two weeks and I would like to have your help to take care of my house and my dog. I will go to Indonesia so it will be a bit difficult to call me. So, it's better to contact me via

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facebook

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messenger or

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Instagram

accounts. My

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number is +4591967809 and my

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and

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name

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Rawisara K.

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dog, Eddie,

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is an easy and gentle dog. He likes to take a walk once a day and normally it's around twenty to thirty minutes. For his food, please give him some wet food from the

secound

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second

shelf storage in

kitchen

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. He likes it so much. We have a housemaid to come every week so you don't need to take a lot of care of the household but please kindly take

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good care of the kitchen because we have a marble table so it needs a neat clean. I hope you

are enjoy

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to stay

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at my place and please note that you can do whatever you want and you like in the house and if you need anything please let me know. I'll call you back. Talk you

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later. Regards, Rawisara

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

219 words

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