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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others thinks face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
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 day and age, people think it's ok to make new
friends
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 through social apps and internet forums.
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 many people disagree, saying that
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 to
face
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 interaction is crucial. In
this
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 essay, we will discuss both views and give my opinion. Nowadays, making new
friends
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 across the globe is easier, thanks to social
media
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. Before
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the internet
 was invented we relied on
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mails
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emails
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 to message our
friends
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 across the globe, and that takes a lot of time to receive our
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mails
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. Whereas, nowadays Through social
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such
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 as Facebook, Twitter, and Reddit we can communicate with each other in a matter of seconds. On the other end of the spectrum, social
media
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 takes away the human element of making
friends
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, which is
face
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 to
face
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 interaction. Social
media
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 may bring
friends
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 from afar closer ,
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however
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 it
also
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 alienates
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people close to us.
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, we prefer chatting with our
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 through Facebook and looking at Instagram rather than having a conversation with our families or
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that is
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next
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 to us. In conclusion, I think social
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 has its place for making new
friends
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, but, let's not forget to make
friends
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 in the real world.

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