You have a full time job and also doing part time evening course, You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. -Describe the situation. -Explain why you can not continue at this time. -Say what action you would like to take.

#time #job #part #course #tutor #-describe #situation #-explain #-say #action

Hello Rakesh Sir, I am Shruti Pathak. I am your IELTS

class

batch no 6 students. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am not able to continue the part-

time

class

due to my work. As I started

class

in January month at that

time

my company provided me with work from home due to

this

pandemic. But, recently they were planning for resuming our office place same like before coronavirus.

Hence

, I am not able to attend

class

on weekdays because my work

time

is 10 to 7 hours and the office place is far away from my residence. That's why I am not able to visit the

class

in the evening

time

as I chose before. I am able to attend the course on the weekend

time

if your organization will provide that.

However

, if it's not possible from your side

then

I will not be able to continue the

class

from

this

month's 15th date. Kindly, take it genuinely reminder from my side. Yours Sincerely, Shruti

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