The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause? How can these problems be solved?
In present days, modernized
cities
have a lot of opportunities to broaden people
's horizons. A vast amount of people
tend to move to cities
in seek of new work and a way of building their careers. However
, it usually causes a shortage of places in working areas and overpopulation.
First
of all, due to the extremely large amount of people
, some cities
have various types of pollution. Overcrowded cities
are more likely to have more car owners. It causes congestions
on roads, which Fix the agreement mistake
congestion
produce
noisy sounds that can be heard from nearby houses. Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
Also
, electric cars have not become so popular yet. Hence
, most of
the vehicles use harmful fuel, gases Change preposition
apply
of
which are spread into the air. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, humans throw away at least a few kilograms of rubbish every day. In most of
the Change preposition
apply
cases
it causes soil erosion and poisoning.
Notwithstanding the current situation, the problems could be solved by Add a comma
,cases
Correct your spelling
governments
government
goverments
of those Correct article usage
the goverments
cities
. In order to prevent overusing of
cars, vehicle ownership might be limited and Change preposition
apply
people
could be allowed to use them only in
certain hours. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, bicycle owners should be given some privileges to persuade others to use environmental safe transport. Governments must make a law of sorting garbage people
produce by dividing trash cans into separate ones, for
instance
old food must be stored in one container, while batteries are in another.
To sum up, I would say that overcrowded towns are the reason Add the comma(s)
,instance
of
many environmental problems we have nowadays. Since we live on one planet, citizens and governments must cooperate to save nature and prevent Change preposition
for
further
catastrophes that may be escalated.Submitted by ilchikaev on
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