You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, The reason I am writing
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letter is that recently I have organized a meeting with our company in your
hotel
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so in
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I am going to tell you the overall feedback from our participants of that meeting.
Firstly
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, the attendants of our meeting were very much amazed by your
hotel
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's interior design, the wallpapers, the way your staff managed, the cleaning of the
hotel
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was really very well.
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, the response we have received from all our guests about the
food
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that has been served them in your
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is not satisfactory
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, they all are very much concerned about the quality of the
food
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it was not liked by all of them. Since the
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served was not tasty even there was some unhygienic
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was presented on their tables. In the
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, I would like to give you some good recommendations in order to prevent negative feedback from your customers in future that you need to more focus on the quality of
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like what will impact the overall taste. I look forward to hearing from your side. Your's faithfully, XYZ
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