There is no doubt that
people
should avoid the factors that
cause
problems in the workspace. Today, some trades and governments have been forbidding smoking in offices and public places. I strongly agree with
this
view because not smoking improves
people
’s health and cleans the
air
in the workplace.
First
and foremost, the numbers of
people
who
smoke
have
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over the years.
Although
they are equipped with the knowledge of how
smoke
can harm the body,
people
have been choosing
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. Smoking
cause
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heart attack and lots of
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so it has been damaging everybody. I recall that my father’s friend died of a heart attack , he was smoking a lot. Doctors said the
cause
of his death was smoking too much.
Also
peopleAdd the comma(s)
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thatCorrect word choice
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smoke
cigarettes
, Remove the comma
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are wasting their money , they can spend
this
money
for Change preposition
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entertainment and fun
to Change preposition
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their families and themselves which
it Correct pronoun usage
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can be important to improve
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emotional
relationshipFix the agreement mistake
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.
Moreover
, governments should promote
a Correct article usage
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healthy
air
in place
workChange preposition
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. Pollution in
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city Fix the agreement mistake
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is dangerous and cigarette
smoke
in public places is the worst. It
also
affects all the
people
around those who
smoke
because when
people
smoke
in public the
smoke
travels everywhere through the
air
, and
it Change the pronoun
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negative effects of
this
smoke
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all living, breathing and
finally
it Correct pronoun usage
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harass others. If the current situation continues, the health of many
people
will remain in danger.
In conclusion, by disallowing
people
who
smoke
from smoking in public,
it Correct pronoun usage
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will
cause
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smokerFix the agreement mistake
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to smokeless, in good circumstances, improving
people
’s health and
cleansWrong verb form
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airAdd an article
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in
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placeFix the agreement mistake
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.