You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter – express your interest – ask for details of the work that needs to be done – let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to taking part in charity

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. I saw a newspaper related to unpaid

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with local kids. I am curious about

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work

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as helping other people always gives me the most satisfaction. I have been working with children for more than five years and I have always felt blessed during

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work

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, I have more patience than youngsters,

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, I can able to an unpaid job with juniors. I would be grateful if you could give me details of your job. Can you tell me how many days of the week I could

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or for how long each day?

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, I would appreciate it if you could tell me what are the requirements for a non-paid job?

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, I currently

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with thousands of students,

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I am not able to take part in your team until the end of January month. After

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month, I will be available from Monday till Thursday from 8AM to 3PM. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Mallika Wadhwa

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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181 words

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