You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter – express your interest – ask for details of the work that needs to be done – let them know when you are available.

#advertisement #newspaper #volunteers #work #children #head #organisation #interest

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to taking part in charity

work

. I saw a newspaper related to unpaid

work

with local kids. I am curious about

this

work

as helping other people always gives me the most satisfaction. I have been working with children for more than five years and I have always felt blessed during

this

work

Furthermore

, I have more patience than youngsters,

thus

, I can able to an unpaid job with juniors. I would be grateful if you could give me details of your job. Can you tell me how many days of the week I could

work

or for how long each day?

Also

, I would appreciate it if you could tell me what are the requirements for a non-paid job?

Lastly

, I currently

work

with thousands of students,

therefore

I am not able to take part in your team until the end of January month. After

this

month, I will be available from Monday till Thursday from 8AM to 3PM. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Mallika Wadhwa

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