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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #community #service #part #school #programmes #charity #neighbourhood #sports #children
Although
 many people incline to think that working for the development of society without any payment is an essential component of the academic curriculum for the
students
. I, completely agree with
this
 notion. My inclination is justified
further
 with reasons and examples. To commence,The foremost argument to prove my point is it will assist learners to secure a bright future. To elaborate on
this
, participating in unpaid social
work
 may bring immense practical experience for the
students
. It will not only help them to enhance their cognizance but
also
 provide self-confidence. Which will
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 of
applying
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 high paid jobs.
Also
,
this
work
 exposure will be added to their academic profile. For
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instance, according to the interview conducted for successful ,
students
 it is proven that all the best candidates are once join community
work
 in their schooling.
Moreover
, it helps
students
 in their overall development.
This
 is to state that, it may provide an opportunity to interact with the folks in society. Ergo, they enable to understand the working pattern in the community which will prepare them to develop communication skills and leadership skills. To decipher, in the DPS (Delhi public school) it is compulsory for the pupils to take part in unpaid social
work
 which helps them to expand their horizons. In conclusion, my arguments- successful career and holistic growth of
students
 are logically acceptable which shows that social
work
 in society is extremely paramount.
Therefore
, all the schools ought to include
this
 without paid
work
 as a subject in courses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • high school programmes
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • improving the neighbourhood
  • teaching sports
  • sense of responsibility
  • empathy
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • college applications
  • job applications
  • positive impact
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