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The results confirm my
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. In my
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, I predicted that increasing
stimulus
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strength
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will
increase
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the
peak
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of the
compound
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action
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potential. From the data collected, the
peak
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of
CAP
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increased from 0mVto 8mV when the
stimulus
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strength
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increased from 0mV to 400mV. The
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is proved. A
compound
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action
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potential (
CAP
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) is a signal recorded from a
nerve
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bundle made up of many different individual
axons
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. As the
stimulus
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strength
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increases, more
axons
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are excited so the
peak
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of
CAP
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will
increase
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(University of Queensland, 2022). As seen in figure 2, at low
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strength
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like 20mV, there is little stimulation so no Na+ channels are opened and no Na+ will rush in, so there’s no
peak
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of
CAP
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and it is 0mV. At low
stimulus
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strength
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like 60mV, only a small number of
axons
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is excited in the
nerve
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, so the
peak
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of
CAP
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is so low which is 0.4mV.
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, when the
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strength
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is high
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like 180mV, all
axons
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will be stimulated to produce the
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CAP
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at 8.9mV.
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, there is a maximum
CAP
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, when the
increase
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in
stimulus
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strength
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has no
further
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impact on the
CAP
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. As all of the
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are stimulated, higher
stimulus
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strength
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can no longer cause more
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to be excited.
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,
this
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peak
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has a maximum height
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which
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is called maximal
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voltage.
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occurs when an
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in
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strength
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the strength
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of
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stimulus
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the stimulus
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has no
further
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impact on the
compound
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action
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,
this
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peak
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has a maximum height
in
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apply
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which
it
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apply
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is called maximal
stimulus
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voltage.
This
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occurs when an
increase
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in
strength
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of
stimulus
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has no
further
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impact on the
compound
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actio
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action
Comparing the three groups, my
group
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had the lowest
peak
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CAP
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with 8.9mV while
group
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2 had the highest
peak
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CAP
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with 12.99mV. For
latency
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, my
group
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got the highest
latency
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period with 1.08ms while
group
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2 had the lowest with 0.98ms.
Latency
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is the time between applying
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and the responses, so it refers to how quick the
nerve
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responds to a
stimulus
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. The reason for the differences in
peak
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CAP
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and
latency
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could be because each
group
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use different sciatic nerves from different cane toads (Bufo Marinus). Different
axons
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have different
diameter
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, myelination, excitability, threshold and speed of conduction. The threshold voltage
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generate an
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potential in different
axon
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axons
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will not be the same, so there will be
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the difference
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in
peak
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CAP
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(Lluka, L., 2020). The results confirm my
hypothesis
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. In my
hypothesis
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, I predicted that increasing the exposure of
sciatic
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the sciatic
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nerve
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of
cane
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toad (Bufo Marinus ) to anaesthetic will decrease the
peak
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of the
compound
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action
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potential (
mV
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). In the experiment, the CPA decreased from 8.9mV to 6mV when the lignocaine is added to the sciatic
nerve
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of Bufo Marinus from 0 min to 6 min, the
hypothesis
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is proved.
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