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The results confirm my
hypothesis
. In my
hypothesis
, I predicted that increasing
stimulus
strength
will
increase
the
peak
of the
compound
action
potential. From the data collected, the
peak
of
CAP
increased from 0mVto 8mV when the
stimulus
strength
increased from 0mV to 400mV. The
hypothesis
is proved. A
compound
action
potential (
CAP
) is a signal recorded from a
nerve
bundle made up of many different individual
axons
. As the
stimulus
strength
increases, more
axons
are excited so the
peak
of
CAP
will
increase
(University of Queensland, 2022). As seen in figure 2, at low
stimulus
strength
like 20mV, there is little stimulation so no Na+ channels are opened and no Na+ will rush in, so there’s no
peak
of
CAP
and it is 0mV. At low
stimulus
strength
like 60mV, only a small number of
axons
is excited in the
nerve
, so the
peak
of
CAP
is so low which is 0.4mV.
In contrast
, when the
stimulus
strength
is high
in
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like 180mV, all
axons
will be stimulated to produce the
peak
CAP
at 8.9mV.
However
, there is a maximum
CAP
, when the
increase
in
stimulus
strength
has no
further
impact on the
CAP
. As all of the
axon
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are stimulated, higher
stimulus
strength
can no longer cause more
axon
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to be excited.
However
,
this
peak
has a maximum height
in
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which
it
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is called maximal
stimulus
voltage.
This
occurs when an
increase
in
strength
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of
stimulus
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has no
further
impact on the
compound
action
However
,
this
peak
has a maximum height
in
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which
it
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is called maximal
stimulus
voltage.
This
occurs when an
increase
in
strength
of
stimulus
has no
further
impact on the
compound
actio
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action
Comparing the three groups, my
group
had the lowest
peak
CAP
with 8.9mV while
group
2 had the highest
peak
CAP
with 12.99mV. For
latency
, my
group
got the highest
latency
period with 1.08ms while
group
2 had the lowest with 0.98ms.
Latency
is the time between applying
stimulus
and the responses, so it refers to how quick the
nerve
responds to a
stimulus
. The reason for the differences in
peak
CAP
and
latency
could be because each
group
use different sciatic nerves from different cane toads (Bufo Marinus). Different
axons
have different
diameter
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, myelination, excitability, threshold and speed of conduction. The threshold voltage
required
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generate an
action
potential in different
axon
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will not be the same, so there will be
difference
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in
peak
CAP
(Lluka, L., 2020). The results confirm my
hypothesis
. In my
hypothesis
, I predicted that increasing the exposure of
sciatic
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nerve
of
cane
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toad (Bufo Marinus ) to anaesthetic will decrease the
peak
of the
compound
action
potential (
mV
). In the experiment, the CPA decreased from 8.9mV to 6mV when the lignocaine is added to the sciatic
nerve
of Bufo Marinus from 0 min to 6 min, the
hypothesis
is proved.
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