There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to bring
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attention
an
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issue I have been having
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your
bus
service
for the past two weeks. I really like to use your
bus
service
but recently I have
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problem
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the
bus
schedule that it is always late around ten to
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fifteen
minutes. Obviously,
this
is causing a big inconvenience as I have to go to work before nine o'clock in the morning and normally, I take the
bus
at 8.25 am. and it will be at my work at 8.50 am but the
last
weeks, the
bus
service
is late ten to
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fifteen
minutes so it
also
makes me late which makes me unprofessional. I know that some other transportation
service
would provide notice so it is possible to find other transport solution to fix it and I would love the company to follow the
bus
schedule which will be more
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convenience
convenient
for all passenger. Thank you for taking
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time to read my concerns. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours
Sincerly
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Sincerely
, Rawisara
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