You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear
Mr.
Smith,
I am writing Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter to express my enthusiasm to join your family and take good care of your kid. I have some justifications to choose this
job.
The first
point is that I am an extrovert person and very friendly with children. As I also
have one boy who is 10 year
old, I got Fix the agreement mistake
years
experience
by taking care of him. Another ground is thatAdd the particle
to experience
,
I usually do research and read books about handling Remove the comma
apply
the
babies and teenagers in every way.
If you are looking for a Correct article usage
apply
baby-sitter
with certification and experience, I am Correct your spelling
babysitter
graduate
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a graduate
in
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of
first-aid
course from Canadian University and completed my internship with Correct article usage
a first-aid
local
nursing home.Add an article
a local
the local
Furthermore
, I also
have
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apply
plan
to spend my free time in Australia. As I am a part-time photographer, I will roam around Change the article
the plan
in
the city to click photographs for my blog writing and approach local magazines.
Thanks in advance for your kind consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours,
SanaChange preposition
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite