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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

#pastime #people #activities
Spending getting more popular in recent years ,especially among youth. I believe it can bring the issues
such
 as overconsumption and can`t find do anything , for ,example teenagers and younger are spending their time on social media and surfing the internet. That`s another sense for why they prefer to shop against free-time activities. So as I mentioned above, in my opinion, the internet is influencing to buy something because day by day getting easier to have whatever they want. Many e-commerce sites has been came out nowadays. Just one click and you can get everything. Another most shooting factor is youths keen on following celebrities,
besides
 they are impressible whom they follow. As we can see a lot of famous
people
, which are affected by young
people
 , are sharing advertisements and
this
 is bringing about an increase in shopping.
However
 , I think we can stop
this
 by guiding young
people
. Particularly all parents, any actor who is followed by young
people
, the government ,and all adults who are close-knit with young
people
 should have shared any kind of consciousness-expanding activities
such
 as theatre, reading clubs, seminar-conference etc.
Although
, it's pointless if they don't implement it themselves
first
 though.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pastime
  • encouraged
  • useful activities
  • self-expression
  • creativity
  • sense of accomplishment
  • satisfaction
  • social interaction
  • bonding
  • escaping
  • daily routine
  • stress
  • instant gratification
  • pleasure
  • keeping up
  • trends
  • fashion
  • exploring
  • products
  • experiences
  • boosting
  • self-confidence
  • supporting
  • local businesses
  • economy
  • discovering
  • personal style
  • preferences
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