You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter o Say what the participant liked about the hotel. o Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. o Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am John from Star builders company. We have organised our company meeting

last

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week in your

hotel

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and I would like to give you some feedback about the experience we had in your

hotel

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Firstly

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, my staff was extremely happy about the facilities you have provided in the

hotel

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like large hall area, projector screen and

faclity

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facility

for parking. I would

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like to mention that my staff was unhappy about the food which has been served for the lunch, we noticed plates and

cultary

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cutlery

culture

culinary

was dirty, food was oily and some other items were uncooked, no proper sitting arrangements in the

lunch room

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lunchroom

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. I would like to suggest you improve the points I mentioned above and you should

reguraly

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regularly

inspect your kitchen area and

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check the food quality before cooking. I am

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hoping for better service from your

hotel

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when we come there on our

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visit. Yours truly, John lee

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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