You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter o Say what the participant liked about the hotel. o Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. o Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John from Star builders company. We have organised our company meeting
last
week in your hotel
and I would like to give you some feedback about the experience we had in your hotel
.
Firstly
, my staff was extremely happy about the facilities you have provided in the hotel
like large hall area, projector screen and faclity
for parking.
I would Correct your spelling
facility
also
like to mention that my staff was unhappy about the food which has been served for the lunch, we noticed plates and cultary
was dirty, food was oily and some other items were uncooked, no proper sitting arrangements in the Correct your spelling
cutlery
culture
culinary
lunch room
.
I would like to suggest you improve the points I mentioned above and you should Correct your spelling
lunchroom
reguraly
inspect your kitchen area and Correct your spelling
regularly
also
check the food quality before cooking. I am also
hoping for better service from your hotel
when we come there on our next
visit.
Yours truly,
John leeSubmitted by mujahidmehdi1996 on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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