You are the member of a sports centre and you have noticed a problem which has not been fixed for some time. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter • tell the manager about the problem • explain how this issue is affecting your experience at the gym • tell the manager what you would like to happen

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Dear Sir, I am one of the members of your sports centre. I would like to inform you about the

problem

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I am noticing

from

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last

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the last

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few days in the gym. The large mirror on the sidewall near the treadmill is broken and it may fall

anytime

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at anytime

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. Every time either

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or any other person goes there for a workout we are feeling scared that it can fall down anytime and can harm us.

Thus

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, I am noticing

this

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for the

last

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few days

and

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apply

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still

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,still

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the

problem

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has not been fixed.

Hence

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, I would like you to fix

this

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problem

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as soon as possible as

this

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could be dangerous for everyone as we need a safe and secure area for workouts.

Moreover

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, I am

also

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hoping if anything like

this

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happens in future you will take action quickly and solve the

problem

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. Yours truly, John Lee

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

147 words

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