You are the member of a sports centre and you have noticed a problem which has not been fixed for some time. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter • tell the manager about the problem • explain how this issue is affecting your experience at the gym • tell the manager what you would like to happen

Dear Sir, I am one of the members of your sports centre. I would like to inform you about the
problem
I am noticing
from
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last
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the last
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few days in the gym. The large mirror on the sidewall near the treadmill is broken and it may fall
anytime
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at anytime
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. Every time either
me
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I
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or any other person goes there for a workout we are feeling scared that it can fall down anytime and can harm us.
Thus
, I am noticing
this
for the
last
few days
and
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,
still
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the
problem
has not been fixed.
Hence
, I would like you to fix
this
problem
as soon as possible as
this
could be dangerous for everyone as we need a safe and secure area for workouts.
Moreover
, I am
also
hoping if anything like
this
happens in future you will take action quickly and solve the
problem
. Yours truly, John Lee
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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