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You recently attend a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. -Say where you think you left the paper -Explain why they are so important - Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

#hotel #home #papers #-say #paper #-explain #manager
I am writing to inform you that I left my
papers
 at your hotel after attending
a
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last
 week meeting on Thursday. I am grateful if you could keep my documents.
To begin
 with, I attended a meeting
at
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second
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the second
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 level and
room
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the room
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 name is TM-03 which is located
to
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on
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opposite
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 side of the sitting
room
. There are so many seats with a rectangle conference table in that
room
 as
this
 is a big
room
 for meeting and I think my paper might be in
this
room
. To be precise, it might be under the conference table because as I remember, I didn’t let any of my property on that table. To be frank, some
papers
 are invoices
papers
, and the others are documents for new projects.
Therefore
, those
papers
 are important for me to make
claiming
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 and proceed
my
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 project planning. I would like you to keep my documents on behave of me as I am currently on a business trip and I will come and take my
papers
 once I get back from my trip. Thank you in advance for your kind support.
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